In a Shop

by Kami
(Johannesburg, South Africa)


In a shop I saw a mop
laying on the top floor.
I looked down and saw a crown
running away from a clown.
Oh I frowned from the clown
and ran to the sound
coming from the ground.

By Jiya M.

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Aug 12, 2023
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starstarstarstarstar 		Well done Jiya NEW
by: Anonymous

Well done Jiya , such a wonderful poem ❤️‍🔥❤️
Aug 08, 2023
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by: Anonymous

Well done Jiya, A lovely poem.
Poetry not my strength but I really
enjoyed the flow of the poem and I am looking
forward to more of your work in the future.
Keep it up!
Uncle Robin
Aug 07, 2023
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great Start NEW
by: rjekison

I like that the poem rhymes and have some structure. Congrats Jiya on your first poem. Hope to read more!
Jun 30, 2023
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by: Anonymous

Very Very innovative and unique. The lines in the poem rhyme .
Look forward to hearing your next poem
Jun 30, 2023
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by: swt.smilo786@yahoo.com

WOW!!!!
The rhythm to this poem is absolutely amazing.
Really love it!!!
Jun 30, 2023
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by: yasmin.muhamed786@gmail.com

WELL DONE

THE WORDS RHYME SO WELL.

WAITING FOR MORE POEMS

YASMIN
Jun 26, 2023
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by: Denise

Hi Jiya,
What a fun use of rhyme!I would love to see some pictures of these images.
Keep on writing!

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