My Dad

by Ridansh
(Gurgaon, India)

East or West, you are the best.
when you are away, I am unrest.
I feel safe in your nest.
In your arms, I feel to rest.
And when I am in a pool, you are my life vest.
You are the greatest.
You make it happen what I manifest.
When I am with you, it is like a fest.
because you are full of zest.
I love you.

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Jul 04, 2023
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Great NEW
by: rashmiagrawal.ca@gmail.com

Good going Ridansh

Jun 29, 2023
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Best Poem NEW
by: Anonymous

Hi Ridansh
You are the best boy. Loved it champ.

From: Mehak

Jun 29, 2023
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Awesome NEW
by: Anonymous

Well done!
Keep it up
Wishing u all the best

Jun 28, 2023
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Dil jeet liya NEW
by: Anonymous

Amazing job Ridu! Your dad will love it and should frame it and hang it in his office.

-Ronnie Chachu

Jun 28, 2023
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Appreciate the efforts and thoughts NEW
by: Neha Ashish Sharma

My Dear Ridhu,

I wanted to take a moment to express my deepest appreciation for the beautiful poem you wrote about your dad. Your words touched my heart in the most profound way, and I am in awe of your talent and the depth of emotions you conveyed through your writing.

Your poem captured the essence of your dad with such grace and admiration. Each line painted a vivid picture of his love, strength, and the impact he has had on your life. It was a heartfelt tribute that honored the special bond you share with him, and it reminded me of the power of words to evoke profound emotions.

Not only did your poem showcase your creativity, but it also displayed your sensitivity and ability to express yourself in such a touching manner. Your choice of words and the flow of the verses demonstrated a maturity beyond your years. It is truly remarkable to witness the depth of your understanding and the way you perceive and appreciate your dad’s presence in your life.

Love
Neha Massi

Jun 28, 2023
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Hi Ridansh,

Such a great poem! I just loved it!
No words, just applause👏👏👏

I am proud of you!
Deepa Kumar

Jun 28, 2023
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Riddu NEW
by: Anonymous

Great work ridhansh

Jun 28, 2023
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Good job NEW
by: Natasha K

Hi Ridaansh, great job! Keep up all the good work! Your dad will love this poem.

Good luck,

Natasha

Jun 28, 2023
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Beautiful poem NEW
by: kherpalnagma@gmail.com

Such a cute poem, at such a young age. Great going Ridaansh.

Jun 28, 2023
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Awesome NEW
by: Anonymous

Such great & true to its core expression of a child’s love for his father ridhansh….very well written champ…great going & all the best

Jun 28, 2023
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awesome NEW
by: poornimagaurav@gmail.com

Such beautiful thoughts

Jun 28, 2023
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Well done Ridansh NEW
by: Alka Anand

Great work little champ keep going on and shine 👏👏👏👏

Jun 28, 2023
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Poem NEW
by: Neha

Very well done Ridansh...the rhythm of your lines is amazing

Jun 28, 2023
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Elegantly written NEW
by: Anonymous

The vocabulary was great. Loved it

Jun 28, 2023
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Beautiful NEW
by: Preeti

Lovely poem champ, Write for massive also.

Jun 28, 2023
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Excellent NEW
by: Anonymous

Very nice Ridansh!! God bless you beta

Jun 28, 2023
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by: Udayveer

Amazing poem
-udayveer

Jun 28, 2023
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Beautifully written NEW
by: Bhawna Dhingra

Awwww... So beautifully written dear. This is an innocent expression of thoughts. Ravi must feel lucky to have you in his life. I really like the drawing under the poem 😍. Keep it up.

Jun 28, 2023
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Very very well done NEW
by: prgrewal@gmail.com

Very well written Ridansh..

Jun 28, 2023
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Very nice NEW
by: Anonymous

It is so good

Jun 23, 2023
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My Dad
by: Denise

Wow! You must have a very happy dad! What a wonderful tribute poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Please keep on writing.

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